Oh, Hello! Days 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18 … Eep!

The Haunting of Mira Beck book cover (c) 2008 All Rights Reserved Whoa!  Has it really been that long? Wow, how time flies!  And that’s what happens amidst the lovely month of November for writers participating in National Novel Writing Month – time flies.  If you have been receiving Chris Baty’s updates you’ll even note that he, the founder and participant since its inception 10 years ago, has gotten a bit ahead of himself so it’s safe to assume the time continuum thingamabob does go wonky for us writer-type folk.

It’s hard for me to remember from one NaNoWriMo to the next, kind of like how childbirthing goes, the pain is just that great that you tend to push it away and relish the joy that came as a result of the pain.  I do, however, vaguely recall this lull in the writing and the absence from daily life that occurs between the third and fourth weeks. 

Now, I’m not going to advocate what Chris Baty, the fearless NaNoWriMo leader suggests to do at this stage, which is to recite favorite ads in the phone book or have a character sing the entire “America Pie” song.  To me, that’s cheating, even borderline plagiarism and to a writer, that’s a might scary word!  I will, however, dispense some sage advice that I have collected over the years that might make this a bit less daunting for my fellow writer-type folks.

Every writer experiences a moment of helplessness and shamefulness. We get to a point where we think we’re all writing complete drivel that no one would be interested in reading.  It’s called the turning point.  And the only way through it is to just. keep. writing.

This isn’t NaNoPublishMo, you’re not creating a final draft that you’ll send out to your agent (if you’re lucky enough to have one and if you happen to have one, please consider putting a good word in for me) or box up and ship out to a POD company.  This is your rough draft.  Write backstory, leave out whole “how I got from there to here” segments and come back to them during the spring NaNoEditMo or whenever you choose to edit your work.  Write lengthy descriptions of your characters, put them in a time and place where they might be having a conversation with you, their creator, or the antagonist.  Hell, even a nice little chat with one of the spear carriers! 

And once you do all that writing, do not delete it.  Do not cut it out of your manuscript!  That’s word count, baby! 

Something that’s motivated me this year is learning that a novel isn’t anywhere near a mere 50K words.  It’s more like double that if not more. In reality, when you near the end of NaNoWriMo you should be about at the halfway point, maybe even a third of the way, towards the end of your story.  Oh, it probably was said in one of the zillion motivational emails I get from the Letters of Light offices (the parent company of NaNoWriMo), but it didn’t sink in until this year.  There I sat, almost halfway to my NaNo goal and I started to freak out.  “I’m nowhere near the end!” I screamed out much to the annoyance of my cat.  “I’m not going to make it!” I cried out in my nightmares.  And that’s okay, because I don’t have to be.  That was a huge relief, my friend!  So take solace, you don’t have to be there. But also don’t start freaking out if you feel you’re almost to the end and you’ve just hit the 30K marker.  Spend some time fattening up your character, give some wealthy descriptions of the setting (after all, you don’t want just a bunch of talking heads, do you?), are you getting in at least 3 of the 5 senses in your writing (seeing, hearing, touching, tasting, smelling)?  Adding those details into your tale will surely fluff up your word count and certainly make it a story you’ll feel more proud to tell. 

Hopefully I’ve made up for my five day absence with these words of advice.  In the meantime, I have a page left to go of the longhand script that’s calling for me.  My current transcribed count is: 34,699 (what a very odd number!) 

No lurkers allowed!  Leave me some love!  I’ll even settle for your own word counts or words of advice you’ve got just begging to be shared.  

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A Day Off And Day 12

Being well ahead of the game with three more write-ins scheduled for the remainder of the week and knowing that with the kids off from school, I wouldn’t get much writing done anyway, I took yesterday “off.”  I even spent some time on the novel in progress that I had set aside to take part in this year’s NaNoWriMo.  No, I didn’t write.  The kids and I drove up into the mountains and took some snapshots of the colorful array of leaves (not as rich as I would have liked seeing that I apparently missed the window and the drought made it less than breathtaking.)  I’m hoping to use some of the snapshots for the cover of “Olly, Olly Oxen Free” the working title of the book. 

(c) 2008 All Rights Reserved My nature quest didn’t stop there.  I went spelunking today.  Virtual spelunking, that is.  Apparently not all caves are alike, or so Mira Beck, the protagonist of my current NaNo novel, has learned.  And so she had to take me along to a few good sites where I could learn more about some caves.  The Oregon Caves to be specific.  It was definitely not something I could just make up, but it was well worth the trip and something I look forward to actually doing next summer when the caves open again. 

Which brings me to a point for novice NaNo’ers.  While it’s helpful to know what you’re talking about as you write your novel, be careful how much time you take doing such.  Get down the points that are pertinent to the story, know that you are writing fiction so you can always make up a place, thing or person and fudge a little bit.  You can flesh it out later (make it your mantra, there’s always NaNoEditMo in the spring to work on editing your novel.)  It’s easy to get caught up in the more finite parts of the novel so you have to be firm with yourself and set limits.  Say you have two hours to write and are getting stuck, spend 15 minutes max doing some surfing and then move on whether or not you have what you were looking for.  You simply have to keep plugging away and moving toward the goal of 50K words (you might even find that you’re not finished with your novel by 50K and that’s okay, too!). 

After tonight’s write-in, I’m up to 28,326 transcribed words and estimate I have about 34,866 words written longhand.  Not too shabby, although I know there have been others that have already reached the goal (what a shock that was to learn!)

Write on!

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Days 8 and 9 and No I Am Not Behind

Flair: Caution Novelists At WorkToday is a catch-up blog, but I haven’t been having to play catch-up with my NaNoWriMo challenge!  I wizened up and took some earbuds with me today so I could plug into the iTunes music library loaded into my laptop and jammed to those while transcribing.  It worked well although I later learned Ry-guy, who accompanied me to today’s write-in, was “embarrassed” his mother was “rocking out.”  Meh.  Between being out with fellow comrades, chatting about the craft, guzzling down a week’s worth of lattes at each write-in session (I’ve been to about 4 already and have another to go to tomorrow) and logging onto the free wifi connections at the various coffee houses we’ve been meeting at, I’ve found I don’t get as much transcribing done as I would like.  Tomorrow I’m going to make sure I don’t log onto the Internet, either, and see how much more progress I make.  I’ll update my word count at the end of that session and we’ll see how I’m doing.  Right now I’ve got an awful kink in my neck and am seriously considering scheduling our next write-in over at the mall where they have several massage chairs set up and actual people giving neck and shoulder rubs.  Twelve bucks for twelve minutes or three lattes.  Yeah, that’s worth it!

Until tomorrow, NaNo, NaNo!    

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Day 7 Pick Write In Locations Wisely

NaNoWriMo Crazy TimesSo, you’re having a write-in, eh?  For those of you out of the loop, a write-in is where fellow writers gather at a public place to write.  By doing this, some writers feel more motivated to write, can ask a question regarding their current work-in-progress and just share the “vibes” man.  I have several words to the wise about picking a write-in location.  Call it your voice of experience speaking. 

Choose a place where the ambient noise isn’t invasive.  A coffee shop set in a brick walled building with a raised ceiling isn’t a good idea.  The noise reverberates to such an extreme your writers will get headaches and not much writing will get done.  Likewise, a brunch house playing trance music at deafening levels will be just as problematic. 

Tables and chairs are always a consideration to take when hunting down the right place.  The coffee house we wrote at last night had seats that were a bit too cushy and tables that were so high, I had wrist spasms for the better part of the night.  We’ve since relocated our upcoming write-ins because I simply can’t handle another day of that.

Speaking of tables and chairs, it would be wise to check the locations first.  A cafe with nothing but small round tables that fit just a couple people (but in reality, maybe one person with a laptop and notepad) could be a bit of a put-off for your invited fellow writers. 

Foot traffic is another consideration.  Try to snag an area that’s a bit out of the path of doors and general foot traffic (such as nearby the restrooms).  If you’re first to arrive for a write-in and didn’t organize it, mention it to the employees you’re there for a writing group and indicate where you’re sitting, then move to a location that’s a bit out of the way. By telling someone that you’re there, you won’t be worried about whether your fellow writers will find you and can concentrate on your writing.

Don’t be offended if you’re not getting the responses you were hoping for when organizing a write-in.  Not everyone can write that way.  And, as a writer, don’t feel put upon if you decide you’d prefer not to attend a write-in.  I repeat: not everyone feels comfortable in those settings.

I won’t update my word counts, both transcribed and longhand.  I didn’t get as much done and really would like to be working on writing so that I can meet the ultimate goal which is to get this done and move back over to the work-in-progress I set aside so that I could participate in NaNoWriMo this year. 

To all my fellow writers, write on! 

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Day 6 Do Not Mess With The Ninja Writer, Foo

Green Eyed Ninja

This was a miserable day for writing. My protagonist doesn’t have to deal with bassackward garbage companies and customer service representatives claiming the customer cussed them out nor do I want her to have to deal with that.  She’s got enough crap to deal with as it is with a ghost chasing her and everything!  I hate it when life interrupts with writing.  It made me come dangerously close to bringing out the damned Ninjas.  So I opted to put on my Ninja hood and write.  There.  Don’t mess with the Ninja writer, foo’!

All my plans for pep talks and other newbie NaNo advice has gone poof.  You can thank the garbage company for that.  And yeah, I now have solid, indisputable evidence that (oh my husband is going to like this) I was right, they were wrong.  Imagine that.  So that’ll just have to wait a day with the exception of this little snippet of advice: 1.) Why are you surfing the net, didn’t you read the rules of engagement from the start of NaNo? 2.) Write! and 3.) If you aren’t signed up for receiving the pep talks and other worldly advice coming from the esteemed Letters of Light (the foundation NaNo runs under), do.  There are some great author letters coming out and wonderful pep talks.  They’ve been doing this for 10 years now and they know what they’re talking about.  Maybe even more than I do.  Eh, or not. 

I think I may have transcribed a mere 200 or less words in the mix of all the mayhem yesterday (Day 6) but I did manage to write out via longhand another 10 pages, so that’s about 2830 more to add onto the already staggering count.  Of course, that’s not official until it has been typed up.  I’m hoping with the four write-ins scheduled over the next four days I’ll be all caught up with the transcribing and by this time next week, done.  And no, I’m not going to shoot for the double goal I did a few years ago.  I am aching to get back to the work in progress that I had been editing before NaNo started.  I mean, I dream about that one, so it has to get done!

Ciao!  And for all my writing homies, write on!  

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